Thursday, 7 September 2017

The Crazy Yeti WALT:Describe a moment in time

WALT Describe a moment in time
  • Present tense
  • Describe what you think, see and feel
  • First person - I, we, my,
  • Descriptive language - adjectives, verbs, similes,
  • Range of sentence starters
The Crazy Yeti

As I was waiting to cross the car infested road I notice a shadow of a massive beast standing right beside me with bright pink toe nails.
“Hello Mr Bob” the giant yeti booms.              
I ignore him and admire what she looks like. A yeti, a giant or a titan.  His legs,arms and body is covered in soft white fur. Feet is blue which makes it even more like a yeti. It seems like he works for NASA which is a really successful space company and the first to launch a rocket.  While still waiting for the emerald green lights I stare with my neck up 180 degrees to see what the titan would look like but I couldn’t see. ‘’Beep beep beep” I waved goodbye to the yeti and went to work .

Torres:Great job! Johann you used a lot of descriptive language. You're on the road to a great writer.

In this task in writing I wrote a moment in time using a picture.

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