Monday, 11 September 2017

The Army Is Invading WALT:describe a moment in time

The Army is Invading
Look at the 4 images.. Choose one, imagine you are there in the moment. Describe what you see, think and feel. Give your writing a title. Delete the images and sentence starters you don’t use. Remember to use the Success Criteria to help you.

WALT Describe a moment in time
  • Present tense
  • Describe what you think, see and feel
  • First person - I, we, my,
  • Descriptive language - adjectives, verbs, similes,
  • Range of sentence starters

“Look out” I yell as my friends and I ran for cover.
Chug Chug Chug The blades from the plane swirl like a cyclone spitting out all the dirt into our soccer field. Cool looking soldiers starts marching out of the massive plane holding modern weapons like the P90 and the M4. “Bang” as a lieutenant shot a revolver aiming at the air. It seems like they are invading our land.  
The mean soldiers marched our way for some kind of reason.  “Get out” one of my friends shouted but they were deaf and kept marching towards us and was metres away from us.

They got a British flag and stuck it right on the land where we use to play soccer.  Was this the end?

In this task we were writing a moment in time using this image.
Here is my writing

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