Wednesday, 19 October 2016

The Space Adventure (Setting)

                            The Space Adventure

YAY!!! “We are on the moon,”shouted Johann.
“I am scared” cried John.
”Look at this place”said Johann.
”It is full of holes or you can say craters”said Johann.
”we can see Jupiter and Earth and there is nothing to be scared about”said Johann.
”What if there are aliens that have laser guns”cried John.
”Even if there is Aliens we have space suits and we are in a space car bruh”shouted Johann.
”fine”moaned John.
”Let’s go"

1 comment:

  1. Well done, Johann. You have included some good ideas relating to space. Try to only use a bit of dialogue in your writing - try to also include some descriptions about the setting and the events.