Wednesday, 27 July 2016

The most boring school day by Johann

                              The Most Boring school day


In SSW we’ve been given a picture of school so this is what I wrote.

On the first day school day Bart and his classmates had maths for the first session in school.The teacher who is called Mrs Cloner made some maths questions up on the board so Bart and his classmates had to do them with the calculator on the phone.But instead everybody was just playing games rather then just use a boring calculator and figure out the maths question. So Bart got bored and also played a game on his phone.When it was morning tea everybody had to give their book to Mrs Cloner.  After Morning tea the teacher said “you all have to do more maths”because they didn’t even get the date done.This time everybody was still playing games on there phone but the teacher checked to see if they were doing their work so everybody quickly switch to the calculator.  When the lunch bell rings every body at least got 4/8 done so they went to lunch and don’t have to do maths today.

2 comments:

  1. Johann, I like your SSW, but you need to edit more carefully e.g. who not which when writing or talking about people. Names begib with capital letters.
    Mr. Shinn

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  2. Johann, I like your SSW, but you need to edit more carefully e.g. who not which when writing or talking about people. Names begib with capital letters.
    Mr. Shinn

    ReplyDelete