Sunday, 24 September 2017

Kevin Group Dolphins Cause and Effect WALT:create a cause and effect map



In reading we have been reading Dolphins.
I created a cause and effect map of dolphins danger.
Here is my map.

Monday, 18 September 2017

The Nobel Prize



In reading we have read about a book called high blood sugar and the scientists who discovered the cure they got the Nobel prize and we chose the people who had won the Nobel prize and got facts about them.

Thursday, 14 September 2017

Excuses WALT: use repetition

Excuses

Sorry Miss…
I can’t go to school
Because it was way too late.
A criminal stole our car
Cause it was way too great

Sorry Miss….
A pirate kidnapped me
And took my bag away
My nasty little tiger
said you must obey

Sorry Miss….
There were dinosaurs everywhere
And the car ran out on fuel
I got diabetes
Because it was way to cruel

Sorry Miss…
A meteor hit our house
And blocked our doorway
A elephant went to crazy
Because it was his birthday

Sorry Miss…
I met this guy call Dave.
He teleported me in a warship
I drinked a can liquid
And started to turn and flip

In writing this week we have been looking at excuses poems and I wrote these magnificent exuses.







Monday, 11 September 2017

The Army Is Invading WALT:describe a moment in time

The Army is Invading
Look at the 4 images.. Choose one, imagine you are there in the moment. Describe what you see, think and feel. Give your writing a title. Delete the images and sentence starters you don’t use. Remember to use the Success Criteria to help you.


WALT Describe a moment in time
  • Present tense
  • Describe what you think, see and feel
  • First person - I, we, my,
  • Descriptive language - adjectives, verbs, similes,
  • Range of sentence starters

“Look out” I yell as my friends and I ran for cover.
Chug Chug Chug The blades from the plane swirl like a cyclone spitting out all the dirt into our soccer field. Cool looking soldiers starts marching out of the massive plane holding modern weapons like the P90 and the M4. “Bang” as a lieutenant shot a revolver aiming at the air. It seems like they are invading our land.  
The mean soldiers marched our way for some kind of reason.  “Get out” one of my friends shouted but they were deaf and kept marching towards us and was metres away from us.

They got a British flag and stuck it right on the land where we use to play soccer.  Was this the end?

In this task we were writing a moment in time using this image.
Here is my writing


Thursday, 7 September 2017

The Fridge of Teleportation WALT:correct narrative structure and using descriptive language

The  Fridge of Teleportation
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Image result for Fridge teleporterAfter a whole day of endless fun Spectre Camo returned from a glorious trip at the best amusement  park ever,movie world!  As Spectre opened his front door he shot straight to the  kitchen like a sniper bullet and opened the fridge.  He was crazy mad and surprised to find that the fridge was empty.  When mum found out that the fridge was empty she was shocked so she told Spectre that she is going shopping at countdown. So he has to stay home alone.

When it was supposed to be dinner Spectre was in his bedroom wondering what he would do. He knew that his mum will come back at night so he checked  one of the old cupboards which has never been opened before to see if he was lucky and can find something to munch on.  But no luck.  All of a sudden he heard a really loud noise coming from the empty fridge  so he went to check what was in there. ‘Clank clank clank’ Spectre opened the weird fridge and he knew something was wrong.  All the food was back in there even the drinks.

As Spectre went to have a bite on a apple all the food started to scramble up together and without knowing he started to feel a large force forcing him closer and closer to the weird fridge.  He pinched himself as hard as he could to see if this is just a weird dream but sadly it wasn’t and Spectre got sucked in the teleporting menace.  Strolling through inside the fridge he smelt an aroma of sweet cake.  Mmmmmm this is the best cake I ever had.  Then there were these ice creams that looks like hand balls.  Suddenly there was a huge rumble that sounded that someone is starving.  In the blink of an eye an immense wave of apple formed into an avalanche and rushed down from the freezer and ricocheted right through the delicious cake.  Was this the end for Spectre Camo?

He bolted to the top fridge and hid there until the terrible avalanche was gone. When he thought he was safe and sound he went to find the exit.  Spectre thought about riding the next avalanche and finding the exit. But after a while he was really tired of waiting but then he remembered that if he bit into one of the cakes the avalanche will come back and that is exactly what happened.  Jumping on the apple he was thinking that this is the his only chance.  1 minute later he was  some ice cubes. His lightbulb lit up because he knew that this the place where he can get out by using the water dispenser. When he reached the small gap he took a leap of faith and hopped in.  There were these giant ice blocks ready to get out to the real world.  Thinking about if he should jump he jumped in the freezing cold water. The force was pulling him outside. He is going to be  set free?    

In the real world he was confused what had happened to him and thought that the food might be in the fridge but there wasn’t. After a few seconds mum was back. She was surprised that the whole kitchen was a mess and said what had happened.  Spectre blurted out all the story and mum said “did you have a great trip”

By Johann

In this text I wrote a narrative using descriptive language.
Here is my writing.






The Crazy Yeti WALT:Describe a moment in time

WALT Describe a moment in time
  • Present tense
  • Describe what you think, see and feel
  • First person - I, we, my,
  • Descriptive language - adjectives, verbs, similes,
  • Range of sentence starters
The Crazy Yeti

As I was waiting to cross the car infested road I notice a shadow of a massive beast standing right beside me with bright pink toe nails.
“Hello Mr Bob” the giant yeti booms.              
I ignore him and admire what she looks like. A yeti, a giant or a titan.  His legs,arms and body is covered in soft white fur. Feet is blue which makes it even more like a yeti. It seems like he works for NASA which is a really successful space company and the first to launch a rocket.  While still waiting for the emerald green lights I stare with my neck up 180 degrees to see what the titan would look like but I couldn’t see. ‘’Beep beep beep” I waved goodbye to the yeti and went to work .

Torres:Great job! Johann you used a lot of descriptive language. You're on the road to a great writer.

In this task in writing I wrote a moment in time using a picture.